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I think you did a great job introducing the topic and purpose of the project at hand. I enjoy your writing as it is concise and clean. As I have gotten back countless feedback from Ferrell on sentence fragments it has been on my mind lately and can see the difference clear cut sentences provides. When comparing the two web sites I like how you presented the prospective audience you felt the web sites were aiming towards. It provided a better understanding of what the web site might be portraying and trying to accomplish. Also calling out the sources and background information the sites have was interesting. Especially with the National Security Agency, calling out for more secondary sources. Its interesting to see the difference from a History standpoint. One site following a more popular history while the other follows a more academic history. I like how you defined what site correlated with what audience.
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